The colors don't really feel like they work together, it just feels like the default adobe flash color pallet. What's worse is the attempt at humor. And the lines...oh the lines. If you're drawing in adobe flash i recommend using a smoothing setting around 41. This should help with the lines. If you're using something like photoshop, you should try to make your lines quick so they don't end up so jagged. I'm sure that you could make some great stuff if you didn't rush it as much.
A pretty good profile icon.
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